Dylan Crocker
Waterloo road 180
Waterloo road 180
Hornby
Christchurch 8042
30th of August 2018
Cafe Staff
Waterloo Road 180
Christchurch 8042
Dear Cafe Staff.
I am writing this letter because I want you to know that I love your cafe food but I would also like to suggest some more food options for our new cafe.
At your cafe there are a lot of positives but here are my top three positives. When it is a cold day your cafe is really warm so we can sit in it. Your menu is really creative it is really different from our old menu. I really enjoy how you change the pizza toppings daily, which is very exciting for us. One of the best thing about your cafe it that there are a lot of seating options so it allows people to hang out with their friends and have fun.
It has also come to my attention that your menu is WAY too healthy for us kids. I still like how it is healthy but it would be nice for some treats. We hope you can add some sweet stuff. Like lollies, chocolate and more. For real food we could have pies, hot chips and burgers even if the burgers are healthy they would still be nice. Also you could consider selling, ice blocks for hot days or even frozen yogurt because that is also healthy and right now we are going onto spring and need things to cool us down.
I am suggesting that maybe we have some combos deals at our cafe. For example you could sell a pie, a cup of hot chips and a drink for 7 dollars, which I believe is not too expensive and would be very for filling. Maybe you could sell different combo options on different days. I think if we have more deals like that, then the cafe would earn more money. Which would be a bonus for all. If this happens I will be going to the cafe WAY more often than I am now. I still really like your cafe but just some little changes would make it better.
Thank You For Your Time.
-Dylan :)
Kia ora Dylan,
ReplyDeleteWhat a well written letter and I really enjoyed how you got your points across so positively. A couple of things I noticed were that you have used your last name on the letter, which is possibly sharing to much private information. Also your text has gone outside the blog post area, you can fix this by copying the text from the source using ctrl + c however when you paste if you use ctrl + shift + v this will mean the text will stay in the blog post area.
Hope that helps,
Nga mihi,
Mark